The work hasn't really reached a new focus since the last peer review, and many of the plans for development have yet to be implemented. However a newer focus on commuting, more specifically queues of cars has emerged. The research leading up to my essay writing discovered a quote by Henri Lefebvre, saying that waiting or commuting is, 'an inevitable product of the bureaucratic appropriation of the everyday'. I discovered that commuting is highly representational of the everyday, the daily rush hour being explicit evidence of society's focus on capital showing itself in the everyday.
Feedback suggestions:
- Create zine focussing on different locations and observations
- Use combination of looser, faster drawings and more detailed, refined, giving more information about place
- Images as singular or sequential, which is more effective? Think about context audience receives work
- Draw same place over and over, showing passing of time, creating a narrative
- Consider whether images are relatable/connect to an audience
- What is the conclusion of work?
- How is visual research going to be processed?
Plans for development:
- Continue focussing imagery down, just waiting and queues, for example - reread essay so that imagery can successfully explore ideas written about
- Start to combine drawings into wider images which explore the everyday as a whole, create compositions that sum up discoveries
- Create zines of themes/locations for example a zine of commuting cars, a zine of people queuing
- Process visual research through collating, selecting, developing, redrawing, collecting, combining
- MAKE MORE WORK
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